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Dawn of Night by Paul S. Kemp (Wizards of the Coast)

Posted by lawrence89 on October 30, 2007

Dawn of Night is the second installment in the Erevis Cale trilogy written by what might be one of the most talented authors of Wizards of the Coast, Paul S. Kemp. In this novel the storyline is picked up more or less where it left off – with the huge cliffhanger – in the previous volume Twilight Falling (reviewed and rated 8/10 by yours truly in August). Needless to say I was more than just remotely curious to find out how the things would turn out, whether any characters had met their sudden demise in process and formost to find out what kind of solution Kemp had ‘cooked up’ to rescue assassin Erevis Cale and his companions out their precarious situation. For those who are unknown to Kemp’s work, up untill date the man has written the afor mentioned Erevis Cale trilogy, is working on a second trilogy (with the first, Shadowbred and the second, Shadowstorm already published) among other notable novels, tie-ins and anthologies – he is in short an accomplished writer.

In Dawn of Night the story expands on the new (unexpected) developments in the plot at the end of the first novel, focuses on the twists and turns while providing a more detailed insight ‘behind the scenes’, illustrating where struggle is really about. The full complications of the situation surface (although they have yet to be grasped by Cale and his friends) and we, as readers, learn more of the mysterious powerful mage aptly named as the Sojourner and his slaadi (slaves). In order to “grow ” his artifact, the Weave Tap (manifesting itself as a magical tree of sorts), he must at least seed two of the seeds of that Weave Tap in nutritious earth – ie. full of magical powers for the Weave to tap into. Believe it or not, the Underdark city of Skullport provides the perfect soil as the city is built in a cavern stabilised by the magic of the Skulls. It also provides the perfect backdrop for most of the action to take place. Added to that, the couple of twists and turns I mentioned that Kemp always has up on his sleeve plus even a tiny bit of romance – and you get a fairly entertaining novel.
Fairly I say, because I found some things the characterization lacking in comparison to the first novel of the trilogy. Most of time the first volume of a three-book series seems to function as an introduction to the world, the characters and the conflict while the second and the third usually take the plot a bit further and ultimately resolve it. This course of events does influence the protagonist in some way (and sometimes the antagonist as well) and he or she will undergo some sort of character development. While strictly speaking there is development of the character of Erevis Cale (his new found abilities for example were incorporated in the story quite nicely) his friends, Jak, Magadon and Riven seem to be stuck in the same stereotypes, as were the antagonists. The Sojourner seemed, at first glance, pretty much the evil wizard type (wouldn’t say ordinary) who is planning to conquer a lot of the universe wielding an artifact or other source of power. The only thing that did interest me was the how of that plan, in which way he was aspiring to fulfill his goals.
The characters seemed, in any case, not that much affected by the plot, which is a bit of a shame really because they could have been much more interesting. Now I know that arguing this might seem a bit unfair, the intention was to write a good sword and sorcery tale (and I think he has succeeded in that), but I still feel that the characterisation of any other character than the one named Erevis Cale could have been better. Or at the very least some of the things the characters had experienced or witnessed should have made a more significant impact on their personalities. The fact that I stress this point here so much might actually also partly be contributed to reading works a la The Warrior Prophet before picking this up, that contain clear examples of what I consider top notch characterization. Then again, different stories should get a different treatment and with that mind I try to review each respective work their own way.
With this out of the way, there certainly were elements that should be positively noted. For example, Paul S. Kemp quite master in writing battle scenes, especially from the assassin perspective. He has a way of building suspense and delivering, describing a battle in detail without getting to technical on the details and just overall keeping it interesting.
The pace was enjoyable as well, not too slow but without rushing the story either. The thing, I think, I like most though about these books is their ability to surprise me even now. So far the endings of the first and second installments have both been great, leaving you stunned and ‘aching’ for more. Paul S. Kemp deserves full credits in that aspect.

So rounding up, I could not completely shake the feeling that Dawn of Night felt a bit like an interlude (although the ending was superb) and we are waiting for the final and decisive battle of Cale versus the Sojourner, which is essentially book 3 so I am expecting fireworks there. The characterization overall was not bad, but lacking in some aspects, the prose was good (the action scenes were especially good) and the plot takes some interesting twists that will you leave stunned and will probably surprise as much as it did me. Bring on the big guns for the ending of the Erevis Cale trilogy in Midnight’s Mask!

6.5-7 /10

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On the spot with the guys from FBS

Posted by lawrence89 on October 26, 2007

Last night, the first of the five seperate interviews I conducted with the three admins and two mods at FBS was put up. The idea of doing these interviews has had a long time coming, I opted for the idea the first time back in July when I discovered that the ‘about’ information of the admins and mods on the frontpage was extremely outdated. So I figured if I could manage to get them to answer a couple of questions on FBS, reading, fantasy – all the things that keep us fanboys/grils keep busy- this could actually serve as a replacement for that outdated information. Apart from that, I wanted to hone my interview skillzz in order to take over the world – oh wait, you’re not supposed to know about that grand scheme. Nah, without kidding, I think we have a great cast of personalities at FBS and I was really curious how they would react to a couple of my questions. If you don’t believe me, go check out The Bodhisattva and take a look at the last post, I mean a guy that is plugging my blog so relentlessly; that guy must have one hell of great A+ personality!

Q&A’s (final version):
Damon Q&A here, Dacco here, Jay here, Patrick here and rounding up with Brian here.

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The Warrior Prophet by R. Scott Bakker (Orbit)

Posted by lawrence89 on October 24, 2007

The Warrior Prophet by Canadian born R. Scott Bakker is the second installment in his Prince of Nothing trilogy, sequel to The Darkness That Comes Before which I reviewed last August. Back then, I was extremely impressed by his debut effort, especially the prose and the scale blowed my socks off. Not surprisingly my expectations at the start of this novel were quite high, indeed so high that I wondered whether Bakker could top the book when delivering his second.
Well, he managed it. Simply put, The Warrior Prophet is mind blowing in both prose and scale. In the Warrior Prophet events really kick into a higher gear, with the Inrithi Holy War with the Great Names marching down deep in the southern lands of the heathen Fanim. We don’t read, we witness events unfolding that shake Earwa (Bakker’s world) on its very foundations. The Consult is stirring, trying to manipulate the war in their favor and bit by bit we piece the puzzle together of this mysterious ‘organisation’ that is obsessed with the reincarnation of the ‘No-God’. The book is quite complex, multiple storylines at the same time (as you’d expect from a good epic-fantasy work) so explaining here every detail would be somewhat of a hassle. To quickly outline the situation at the start of the novel; the Holy War has accepted the deniture of emperor Ikurei Xerius and in addition, has accepted the martial leadership of the Scylvendi ‘barbarian’ Cnaiur (breaker-of-men-and-horses and most violent of all men). Achamian, Mandate Schoolman, accompanies Prince Kellhus of Athithrau, Xinemus, Serwe and the rest of the retinue of prince Nersei Proyas.

Now before I really start giving you my thoughts, I think it would be wise to point out that this book, even the whole trilogy, will not appeal to everybody equally as much. It is set up in a very pretentious manner and especially Bakker’s prose, his tendecy to add a bit of philosophy to the whole package, and the fact that he just does not elaborate on (or does not want to elaborate) every detail the story make the works not all that accessible. For example I still not have the slightest idea what the No-God is. But once you have bitten through the sour apple, the reads are well worth your time. I still remember stumbling through the dark when I was reading the first hundred pages or so of The Darkness That Comes Before, wondering ‘where the hell does this lead to?’ and ‘what is going here?’ and frankly, I still have not yet a completely clear answer to this question. However, I do have clues – many of them – and figuring out all by myself how deep the rabbit hole goes is one certain way of keeping me immersed and involved.
When comparing this volume with its predecessor one must also note that subject matter differs from book to book. The Warrior Prophet is much more action-oriented and much less setting up story-lines, introducing characters and developing various intrigues (there is however still plenty shadowy Consult intrigue). For some (like me) this subject matter is extremely appealing , where for others this might not appeal that much.

As I said, the prose is not all that accessible but I have fallen in love with it nevertheless, as I experienced it as challenging. The prose could be described as ‘darkly poetic’ – and works especially well with the battle scenes (which you will find littered all over this installment). I feel Bakker is really a master at striking the right tone – in the (battle) scenes – and building up suspense. Moreover, the way in which he wields his prose has a gripping, unrelenting effect on you as a reader. Once you settle in the flow of the prose you will find it hard to put down the book. The prose certainly plays a big factor in keeping the reader involved and churning down those pages.
The characterisation is excellent as well, even better than it was in the previous volume. In the Warrior Prophet for example we’ll get some more glimpses at the true nature of Kellhus . Bakker has a way of digging deep into the personalities of the different characters with all their flaws and really bringing that psychology aspect into play which leads to amazing insights. This in turn results in characters who are intriguing and that have a really fleshed out feel to them. Almost all of the character that were focused on earlier during the series also get some sort of form of character development, with the development of Kellhus, Cnaiur and Achamian the most notable. Especially the latter ‘grew’ on me, the author developed the character in surprising manner but all for the better of it. The former two still remain shrouded in many ways, but that is part of their appeal I think. Although we got to see only a couple of scenes through Kellhus’ point of view, his clashes with various Consult skin-spies actually made me want to empathise more with the character as if he is on the ‘good’ side after all. It was also interesting to see him experiencing more ‘human’ feelings than we have seen him doing before.
The world building as I like to refer it to, is impressing. Haunting beautiful descriptions of the Carathay desert spring to my mind. It almost felt like the pages were blazing the desert heat. Here once more the style of prose plays a pretty big role in achieving the depth of the the world building. For example the Fanim lands the Holy War is marching through evoke a sort of surreal feeling, but at the same time leaves you aching for more details. Bakker really does do a great job in painting a realistic, immersing setting to serve as a backdrop for his story. What makes him so unique is that he is able to conjure with his writing such underlying dread in the atmosphere of the world that is almost physically tangible. In epic fantasy it is a rare occasion that I have come across a work so utterly grim and gritty to its very core.The pace was for the most part pretty consistent, although the last two hundred pages I feel some physical descriptions could have shortened a bit as it slowed down the climax.

Overall, I thought that the Warrior Prophet was a mind blowing read with excellent prose, great world building and an impressing scale to go with that as well. The characterisation is rich and deep, the character really intrigue in their flawed ways. I definitely would argue that this installment is even better than its predecessor, only the pacing just a tiny bit uneven at times. This probably the best book that I have read this year. If you have not picked up this series, do so immediately because every fan of the genre should not miss out on this one.

9/10

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Back in the full swing

Posted by lawrence89 on October 22, 2007

Well I am back (as you’d probably figured) I had a great time kiting on the beach and I managed to read about 600 pages of fantasy works (mostly The Warrior Prophet). Now all that remains for me is to get my head down and write reviews of both TWP and Kemp’s Dawn of Night, with the first being mindblowing and the second very good as well. Just different types of books, so they will get a different kind of treatment.
Meanwhile, as a big Erikson fan I would like to direct you to Jay Tomio’s blog where he put up an excellent review of Night of Knives. I wished I could reviews the way he does, be sure to check it out to see what I mean. Actually it was kind of because of these types of reviews I got all excited about the reviewing thing, in a way some reviews really do honour the book and that is great to see. Same goes for Larry at the OFblog and Robert over at Fantasybookcritic, I sometimes find myself rereading their reviews over again (plus the pace they put out reviews is astonishing as well).

On the other hand, we have something of world premiere over at FantasyBookSpot, Damon conducted the very first audio interview with Alex Bledsoe author of the “The Sword-Edged Blonde” . Really cool stuff, exciting to see how the audio interview thing will unfold. Check out the thread here.

And since I am plugging here anyway, why not give dump to the new synopsis of Richard Morgan’s fantasy debut, “The Steel Remains”. Full synopsis over at UK SF Book News. Looks like Gollancz is publishing great stuff in the near future, can’t wait to see if it lives up to its expectations.

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Quick notification II

Posted by lawrence89 on October 13, 2007

I am off for a week to Cadzand, Zeeland (ie. to the sea!) so I won’t be posting here. Have great time guys reading and bring on some great reviews to the scene.

Dawn of Night, Midnight’s Mask, Shadowbred and The Warrior Prophet (which I sadly have not been able to finish before going on this trip) will I be bringing along side with me, so expect a burst of reviews when I return! And don’t forget it is Paul S. Kemp month, so make sure you check this author out (links in the october reading post for example).

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My humble book collection (so far)

Posted by lawrence89 on October 10, 2007

I have only been buying books for about two years now – and have been buying much more recently. I decide to take some pictures of my book collection because of a ’show bookcase’ thread that was opened at one of the message boards I tend to visit. So for your own amusement, I hereby present the Gravel Pit book collection.

Top shelf of the bookcase (1/3)

Top shelf of the bookcase (2/3)

Top shelf of the bookcase (3/3)

Recently added books in a small-ish bookcase (look, one of my stereo speakers there)

And last but not least – stuff I have read when I was kid (mostly Dutch works)

Like I said, a humble collection so far, right? I am adding books as we speak though..

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October reading (Paul S. Kemp month)

Posted by lawrence89 on October 8, 2007

Generally october is a month with bad weather and a lot of rainy days, which makes up for good reading weather. So this is what I will be reading in my spare time the upcoming 30 days or so.

R. Scott Bakker – The Thousandfold Thought
I am well into The Warrior Prophet, part two of the trilogy, and liking it so far although a bit more action and some more Cnaiur wouldn’t be that bad. Of course I want to know how the trilogy ends, there seems to be a lot of talk about whether the ending is good, but I want to see/read with my own eyes. Thus I will be picking up this rather thick paperback by Bakker.

Dawn of Night / Midnight’s Mask / Shadowbred / Shadowstorm – Paul S. Kemp
Time for some serious Kemp-reading. October will be Paul S. Kemp month on the Gravel Pit! DoN and MM complete the Erevis Cale trilogy and the two other novels mark the beginnening of the Twilight War trilogy. So far I have only read Twilight Falling by Paul S. Kemp and ended up rating the novel a solid 8/10. Hopefully the other four novels will make up for good reading too. I am looking forward to reading them. You can check out Paul S. Kemp website here and read the first excerpts of Twilight Falling here and Shadowbred here. Go take a look!

The Princes of the Golden Cage – Nathalie Mallet
Got this one as a review galley, after Remy over at the Fantasy Review gave it such a glowing review. Don’t really know what to make of it beforehand, but we’ll see.

The Electric Church – Jeff Somers
I requested the review galley after reading through the excerpts here, which did really grab my attention. In addition, Jeff Somers launched a great, promotional website some time ago that offers some nice (an rather creepy) interactive background and sets the mood for the Electric Church. It is one of those releases that got me all hyped up and ready to start reading.

Ragamuffin – Tobias S. Buckell
Although the author got my name wrong ( ;) ), he was nice enough to send me a signed review copy of Ragamuffin, the sequel to Crystal Rain. Crystal Rain was a refreshing read last time around and I am really hoping Ragamuffin offers euqally as much entertainment and fun reading times as its prequel did.

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Some great quotes by Charlie Huston

Posted by lawrence89 on October 8, 2007

Last night I had great chat with Maria over at FantasyBookSpot (drop by in the chat once, it is a fun place to hang around) and subject of swearing and Charlie Huston came up. She told me that she once sent Huston a couple of emails in which she addressed the issue that he overly used the F-bomb in his novels at times. His answer to was quite hilarious I admit. Check out the full thread here over at the wonderful FBS.

” Glad you liked it. Next time you’re on with the forum, tell ‘em I said I’m pleased as all fucking hell to have them reading.
Best to ya,
charlie “

“Please tell them it’s a message sent with love.

Also, if you think they can bear it, I’ve pasted in an entry from my website that I wrote a couple years back. Feel free to share it with them.

Best,

charlie

Vile Manners: August 18th, 2005 —

NEW YORK, August, 18 – Vanity is a shameful quality.

Therefore, having previously used this forum to draw attention to positive reviews I’ve received, I suppose it’s time to give equal space to the opposition.

So:

“I thought this book had the most vile language than in any other book I have read. The author is certainly well versed in four letter words, at least one that begins with “F” The only saving grace was Bud, the cat, who brought civility to the main character, who also loved his parents. I was looking for an amusing escape similar to Hiason’s work.” – Reader review of “Caught Stealing” posted on Amazon

Vile.

Vile?

My language is the most vile she has ever read in any book.

I think I’m blushing.

Seriously now, I don’t want to be overly light about this. The woman who posted this review apparently laid down several of her hard earned dollars to buy my book and help me to pay off my advance. All she got for her investment was a read full of my vile language.

So, first off, I’d like to thank her for taking a chance on my work. I’ve read one of Mr. Hiason’s books, and enjoyed it, but I can see how the pants-shitting incident on page 40 of “Caught Stealing” might come as a shock when what you were looking for was a risqué romp through the Floridian backwoods.

Second, while I’m genuinely sorry that she didn’t like the book (I want everyone to like my work), I can’t honestly apologize for my language, vile or otherwise. What I can do is assure her that my foul mouth is my mom’s fault.

No shit.

My mom curses like a fucking longshoreman and she taught me virtually everything I know about vile language and the fucking “F” word.

Mind you, my dad’s no slouch. But while mom curses like a longshoreman, dad made his living as a teamster and his curses took a back seat. He was also out of the house 9-5 and just didn’t get as many opportunities to help craft my vocabulary. No knock on his efforts, he just didn’t get to put in the hours that mom did.
Nope, when it comes to vile fucking language, mom was my tutor.

She gave me classics like,
“Make sure there’s no shit on your shoes.”

And,
“Who left their shit here?”

Often followed by,
“I’m not your fucking maid.”

Who could forget,
“Take that shit outside.”?

And the all time winner,
“Watch your fucking language.”

But lest you think she was neglecting her duties to help give me a well rounded education, she also taught me to curse in her family’s native Serbo-Croatian.

To this day I can swear quite fluently in two languages.

She also, along with my dad, taught me some manners.
Please.
Thank you.
How to open a door or offer to carry something for someone with their hands full.

That kind of thing.

So maybe I should make a proper apology here.

Ma’am, whoever you are, I’d like to apologize for any offence you took at my use of language. I’m very fucking sorry.

And, hey, mom, thanks a fucking bunch for the manners. Shit, you fucking too, dad. Fucking love you guys.

Have a fine fucking day,
Charlie “

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No Dominion by Charlie Huston (Orbit Books)

Posted by lawrence89 on October 7, 2007

No Dominion is the second installment in the Joe Pitt casebook series by American author Charlie Huston. It is the sequel to “Already Dead” (originally published in 2005) which I reviewed at my blog last August. In No Dominion Charlie Huston pretty much picks up the story where he left off at the end of Already Dead and when we jump right into the action we find our badass vampire P.I. knuckling up in a bar-fight. That is not all too shocking but what is shocking is the fact that the vampire is ’spazzing’ as if under influence of some drug. When Joe has come back to home, Joe finds out that his “stash” is dangerously running low and that makes him a desperate man. Desperate for a job as well and for some blood to hold the vyrus at bay for a bit longer. Thus, he searches out Terry Bird, his former ‘employee’ and leader of the Society clan. After informing Terry on his strange encounter last night, the Society leader offers Joe the job finding out the source of this new drug on the vampire market. Blood and a lot of cash are the rewards. Sounds like a good deal. However, it involves paying the neighborhood above the 111th a visit. You do not want to be found there, as it is also known as ‘the Hood’. That is where all the crazy cats hang out..

Similar to picking up the storyline, Huston also picks up the pace and the gritty noir style he’s known for. As with Already Dead, No Dominion is brutally fast-paced and rushing into the action. Good thing there plenty of that in this novel. The thing I like most with Charlie Huston and his Joe Pitt series, is that he does not waste too much time outlining the whole situation, he dumps the reader just right back into the action. That is what we came for in the first place, that is why we picked up this novel in the first place. His prose is, like I said, very to the point without neglecting details that make his novels so brilliantly crafted. His dialogues are amongst the most powerful I have seen and exhale that gritty noir style that I have come to like so much. No flowery descriptions, no info-dumps just Joe Pitt doing the math and kicking some serious vampire ass. At first glance the plotline seemed to be a bit too linear, but it turned out completely otherwise with some multi-layered twists going on that will leave you stunned. The setting is once more vivid, New York downtown seems like a great place to kick it but what really stood out was our newest addition; ‘the Hood’. The scenes where Joe met up with ‘warlord’ Dj Grave Digga were certainly among the best of the Joe Pitt casebooks so far, because Joe’s style contrasted Digga’s hiphop style in a real nice way and that seemed to improve the overall quality of the story. On the downside, some scenes were a little bit too stretched I found and could have been resolved in much quicker manner. Nevertheless, it did not hurt the story all that much.
Speaking of the length, another great thing is that Charlie Huston keeps his novels around the 250-260 pages mark resulting in a short but entertaining read. Just lenghty enough for you to hold your breath while reading! Apart from that, it makes up for a pleasant change from all the thick works (600+) that pop up out of nowhere these days

The major downside of the novel is the characterization of any other character than Joe. Evie, his girl, was used once again a sort of plot device to show the more humane side of Joe’s personality and trying to make empathizing with our protagonist maybe a bit more easily. Most of the vampire characters could be replaced with each other (with the exception of Dj Grave Digga I mentioned earlier, I would like to see more of this guy) . The thing is with the vampire characters is that it so easy to detect the different archetypes that they are not challenging to read about. Joe Pitt on the other hand still manages to surprise me at times and that alone makes the novels worthwhile.

So rounding up this review, I can honestly say No Dominion is a blast. It offers the same gritty noir-style with the brutal pace as did Already Dead, only added to that we have a nicely multi-layered plot and Joe Pitt ends up making some interesting choices. On the downside, the characterization was not all that special but the rest really did make up for that. Bring on the third Joe Pitt (coming our way late December 2007) Half the Blood of Brooklyn I’d say! For I rate this effort by Charlie Huston:

8.5 / 10

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